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livrelibre ([personal profile] livrelibre) wrote in [community profile] white_lotus 2011-02-10 08:18 pm (UTC)

Awesome June fic! And you made her a hardboiled detective, which A++! I love her toughness, cynicism, dedication, smarts and practicality (her three rules made me laugh), her smoking and drinking and food focus, her snarky flirtation with Iroh (awesome!). And I love the language you use to fit the noir detective atmosphere but how it's still so Avatar with Mai being all badass and Zuko still an overdramatic dork. This was wonderful, mystery writer! Thank you so much!

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