Okay, this story is AWESOME. You did such a great job making it noir and yet keeping it true to the Avatar universe, the characters are wonderfully themselves, and P.I. June ROCKS EVERYTHING.

"I hate you," Mai said. "You don't trust me at all. Happy birthday. I hope you choke on it."

*snort*

And ...

Let's never mention this one again.

*gigglesnort* Poor June, not every story ends in death, betrayal and tragedy!

Wonderful story!