whitelotusmods: Appa from Avatar sitting in the desert (Appa!)
whitelotusmods ([personal profile] whitelotusmods) wrote in [community profile] white_lotus2011-02-05 06:34 pm

LNYE Fic treat: Bigfruit for glass_icarus

Title: Bigfruit
By: [personal profile] terajk
Recipient: glass_icarus
Characters: Momo, Appa, Aang
Ships: Appa/Momo
Word count: 149 words
Rating: G
Content Notes: None.

Summary: Momo broods.

Bigfruit bigfruit bigfruit his.

Roar.

No. Not Appa's bigfruit. His.

ROAR.

Smallfruit for Appa. Fits in Appa's mouth. Momo holds bigfruit, paws don't touch. Bigfruit for Momo.

Appa breathes. Momo falls down.

Boy—their boy—comes. Blah blah blah, goes their boy. Momo feels noises' shape. No. HIS bigfruit.

Their boy takes bigfruit away, makes it small. Gives Appa bigger part.

Hiss, boy.

Blah blah blah Appa blah.

Hiss, Appa.

Momo broods. Appa gulp bigfruit. Not savor it, like Momo.

Appa doesn't gulp. Appa nibbles slow, delicate. Nose pushes tiny bigfruit toward Momo. Momo gulps.

Bad. Bad Momo.

Momo eats bigfruit, leaves tiny big piece. Big piece for Appa. Appa gulps. Appa licks Momo. Momo shakes. Bad Appa.

Still, Momo flies. Settles on Appa's shoulders, hunts tasty bugs in Appa's fur. Stomach full of bugs and bigfruit, crawls to Momo-shaped space behind Appa's neck. Curls up there.

Good Appa.
yue_ix: Plush bear with hearphones and the words "world of words" (Podfic: world of words)

[personal profile] yue_ix 2011-02-06 12:48 am (UTC)(link)
This is so cute! I'm awed by how you managed such a cute, IC tale through such a restricted pov.
terajk: Ryoga, grabbing Ranma by his pajama-top and shouting: "Do you remember where my house is?!" (momo)

[personal profile] terajk 2011-03-04 12:36 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you!

It was actually really fun...like writing a sonnet, in a way.