LNYE Poetry Treat: Conventionality for yifu

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Title: Conventionality
By: mecredigirl
Recipient: a fill for yifu's prompt
Rating: Suitable for all.
Character(s): Ursa
Content notes: None

Moon above the plains,
Grey light upon the terrace.
Aosha tries to dream.

Brush and deepest ink
Dancing out the strokes for 爱:
Marriageable skills.

Her gaze crosses court;
A frowning young man startles.
Does she know his name?

Clink of silver taels
On her father's table --
She fetches good coin.

Red silk bows her head,
Gold phoenixes romp her robes.
Walk to your future.

Comments

[terajk]

Oh, this is lovely. The last stanza is my favorite, though it's all beautiful.

(*shakes head at her lack of Ursa icons*)

[mercredigirl]

Thank you :)

[recessional]

Oh my god, this is gorgeous.

[mercredigirl]

Thank you :)

[yifu]

Whoa! *is awed* Didn't expect this prompt to be filled, and with such gorgeousness too!
Marriageable skills.
This part haunts me most. Thank you so much, anon!

[mercredigirl]

I'm glad you liked your fill! :)

[vi]

Beautiful and ominous - this is lovely.

[mercredigirl]

Thank you! (And I love your icon!)

[eruthros]

Wow, this is great.

[mercredigirl]

Thank you! :)

[such_heights]

Oh, ouch. This is beautiful.

[mercredigirl]

Thank you! :)

[trascendenza]

Oh, this is so lovely.